Car trouble

"Eward,are you ok?"Jeremy asked.The car who called Ewarad told him that he felt not well and would like to take a rest."Jeremy,I would like to tell you something while it may be brake your heart."Eward said,"you are too heavy for me to bear, why don't you keep fit?If you success reducing weight, not only you can get a healthy body,I can be more relaxed to bear you to anywhere!

 Jeremy also thought that  Ewarad broke down because of his heaviness, but this idea has stay in Jeremy’s mind less than one second. Jeremy response to Eward “Causes of this situation are not all on me alright? You also have responsibility, why you can’t have greater power and a better engine? If you were better I believe we won’t stuck in this situation.

Edward can't take it anymore. "It was totally your fault making me malfunctioning , how dare you blame it on me ? Stop being ridiculous and go for a diet you fat elephant !" Edward shouted to Jeremy . And Edward's engine start making louder and louder noises as he getting more frustrated . With no surprise, Edward burns up his engine , making Jeremy stuck in the middle of a highway , helplessly , suffer the retribution of treating his car unjustly .

組員:黃梓熹,區愉柏,吳文軒,婁潤庭,林子諾

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